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Friday, March 11, 2016

this is my slide show


this is a fun challenge we did with miss cowles

this is my weekend

this is what i did on my weekend
TITLE: rainey  shopping day
Planning
1.rain
2.shopping
3.bugs


Writing
The rain banged loud on the roof hail stones fall to the ground my Aunty said come on we're going shopping at kerikeri. We left the hail stones were bangging loud on top of  the car I was so scared finally we were there .


We went inside to go  to buy some things me and my cousin got a Easter bunny each .Me and my cousin were playing hide and go seek i went to go look for my cousin  he was hiding in the big box with pillows in them.
We walked over to where the car was parked all of the saderen there were heaps of them because they must be attracted to bright colors  and my Aunty's car was a bright orange car it was so funny.

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Some simple ideas and some detail. Make sure you include more detail about what happened, so what did you buy and what did the hail look like?

Thursday, March 10, 2016

Thursday, March 3, 2016

Room 6 Kawa of care

I will always look after my chromebook and this is a slide show our class made 
              to show kawa of care 

Friday, February 26, 2016

The Dream Giver


In the night sky an old man came to a boy's house but that old man was a dream giver he gave little kid's good dreams he  cracked open a magical egg with pixie dust in it he poured the pixie dust into the little boys shoes the shoes turned white a beautiful lady danced in the little boys shoes she danced like a ballerina the ballerina danced over to the boy’s bed she gave t later that night the boy woke up in his dream he was another world a world full of birds butterflies and some old rocks with faces on them  skull tons then the little boy made the wrong disson he picked up a rock that had caving on it then but that oy picked up the rock from a sagret temple the a huge monster appeared behind him and chased him to a cliff.the  boy a good dream  the little boy had a dream about him becoming an astronaut.The boy was chased to the cliff by the big black monster the monster tried to kill the boy but the monster was to big he made the tree fall on him the monster fell to the ground a sound of a bang the monster fell to the ground.

Friday, February 19, 2016

Thursday, February 11, 2016



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