I am a student at Bay of Islands College in Kawakawa, New Zealand. This is a place where I share my learning.
Friday, March 11, 2016
this is my slide show
this is a fun challenge we did with miss cowles
this is my weekend
this is what i did on my weekend
TITLE: rainey shopping day
Planning
1.rain
2.shopping
3.bugs
Writing
The rain banged loud on the roof hail stones fall to the ground my Aunty said come on we're going shopping at kerikeri. We left the hail stones were bangging loud on top of the car I was so scared finally we were there .
We went inside to go to buy some things me and my cousin got a Easter bunny each .Me and my cousin were playing hide and go seek i went to go look for my cousin he was hiding in the big box with pillows in them.
We walked over to where the car was parked all of the saderen there were heaps of them because they must be attracted to bright colors and my Aunty's car was a bright orange car it was so funny.
Marking
Ideas
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Comment
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I agree with miss
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Miss Baker
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Some simple ideas and some detail. Make sure you include more detail about what happened, so what did you buy and what did the hail look like?
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Thursday, March 10, 2016
this is my challenging choices
this is my work about finacial literacy
Thursday, March 3, 2016
Room 6 Kawa of care
I will always look after my chromebook and this is a slide show our class made
to show kawa of care
Friday, February 26, 2016
The Dream Giver
In the night sky an old man came to a boy's house but that old man was a dream giver he gave little kid's good dreams he cracked open a magical egg with pixie dust in it he poured the pixie dust into the little boys shoes the shoes turned white a beautiful lady danced in the little boys shoes she danced like a ballerina the ballerina danced over to the boy’s bed she gave t later that night the boy woke up in his dream he was another world a world full of birds butterflies and some old rocks with faces on them skull tons then the little boy made the wrong disson he picked up a rock that had caving on it then but that oy picked up the rock from a sagret temple the a huge monster appeared behind him and chased him to a cliff.the boy a good dream the little boy had a dream about him becoming an astronaut.The boy was chased to the cliff by the big black monster the monster tried to kill the boy but the monster was to big he made the tree fall on him the monster fell to the ground a sound of a bang the monster fell to the ground.
Friday, February 19, 2016
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